Score: 7

"Graet concept"

submission: Attack of the Pink Balls!

date: September 5, 2008

Great idea, although it could use some improvement. I suggest increasing the rate of difficulty. Maybe some alternate modes of play, platforms, various power-ups etc..

7 of 10.

Forever changing,
Secretnile

Score: 6

"Not bad"

submission: Top 10 Diseases

date: September 5, 2008

Not bad for a first, that's for sure! Just be sure to add sound! I cannot stress sound and length enough!

Now, although yours had length, it was very slow paced - But for the genre that was unavoidable.

It wasn't exactly 'funny', but the dry humor was slightly amusing.

I would really like you to try to build on this one. Add more animation, and sounds. Possibly a few more illnesses, and narration.

Keep up the work, get better each time - And maybe one day you'll be a front pager. ;-)

6 of 10.

Score: 4

"Meh..."

submission: Reject Mental ep.1

date: September 5, 2008

It was too slow paced, and the vocals were hardly decipherable.

Great animation (Apart from slow pace), and choice of back ground music though.

On your next one, work on building up the pace faster, and a more precise recording for the voice(s).

4 of 10.

Forever changing,
Secretnile

Score: 9

"Great :-)"

submission: Fetch

date: September 5, 2008

For the genre you made it for, you did awesome!

Great animation, great length, great sound, great execution.

I don't really have any comments on how to improve it. :-)

9 of 10.

Score: 4

"Length!"

submission: tweed and luc PART 1

date: September 5, 2008

For 20 min, that's not a bad video. Although the humor was stale, it was mildly entertaining. (Lower end of mild have you)

I would work on your plot a bit more for your next one, and some more... well funny humor would be nice.

Length, length, length! I feel like a broken record in my reviews. Make them longer! I know it's hard to sit at your computer for hours on end making these flash videos, but it's worth it! You'll never be successful in flash if you don't add some length!

3 of 10.

Forever changing,
Secretnile

P.S. Rated 4 of 10, just because you had sound, another thing I have to say 50 times a day.

Score: 5

"Not bad.."

submission: MD08 - Pencil Onslaught

date: September 5, 2008

...for hand drawn. Next time I would increase the length, and make the images more distinct. Also, make sure the sound is synced with the video. (The video started a few seconds before the sound on this one)

Keep trying, I'll be seeing more from you I'm sure.

5 of 10.

Forever changing,
Secretnile

Score: 7

"Very nice"

submission: Fysics

date: September 5, 2008

I love how it's so simple, but so addictive - So easy to learn, so hard to play.

Only improvement I can think of off the top of my head would be sound.

7 of 10.

Score: 7

"Addictive"

submission: Shark With Wheels

date: September 4, 2008

For such a simple game, it was quite addictive!

I would chance the back-ground, makes your eyes sore after a while...

Nice concept, great execution ;-)

Note: Quit button does nothing :o

6 of 10.

Score: 10

"It's about time!"

submission: Dance N Drive

date: September 4, 2008

A hilarious vid! Family friendly, great animation, perfect execution!

I can't find anything that needs to be improved!

Congrats on my first perfect review. :-)

10 of 10.

Score: 0

"Terrible"

submission: 3 guys in the deset

date: September 4, 2008

Apart from the lack of sound, spelling/grammar errors, poor graphics, and predictable story-line? Not bad.

My advice? Be willing to spend a bit more time on your work, or get a new hobby.

0 of 10.

(Maybe I was a bit harsh... *Gives fugiglybot a cookie*)