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Great idea, although it could use some improvement. I suggest increasing the rate of difficulty. Maybe some alternate modes of play, platforms, various power-ups etc..

7 of 10.

Forever changing,
Secretnile

September 5, 2008

Author's Response:

The rate of difficulty is increasing.
At the following:
800 pts - normal
1600 pts - challenge
3200 pts - sweat
6000 pts - have mercy
100000 pts - none shall survive

Thanks for the comment :D

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Score: 6

"Not bad"

submission: Top 10 Diseases

date: September 5, 2008

Not bad for a first, that's for sure! Just be sure to add sound! I cannot stress sound and length enough!

Now, although yours had length, it was very slow paced - But for the genre that was unavoidable.

It wasn't exactly 'funny', but the dry humor was slightly amusing.

I would really like you to try to build on this one. Add more animation, and sounds. Possibly a few more illnesses, and narration.

Keep up the work, get better each time - And maybe one day you'll be a front pager. ;-)

6 of 10.

September 5, 2008

Author's Response:

ok, thanks... Like I've said to the guys who posted after you I made this as a project, and I had no idea how to use actionscript or anything at the time of making, so it came out to be a stupid thing... the timing wasn't down because I was playing with it and the teacher talked to me about length and the like... thanks for your help.